Self Review of Paper

My essay has a continual focus to how I get my essay done. There is a theme and it progresses and transitions from one step to the next. It is very easy for the reader to come on my "writing process journey" with me, since I really take them through an example of this process. But, with this I could definetly analyze my process more rather than just really telling it to my audience and going into detail about it. My essay does stay clear on topic though with what happens during the writing process and is very organized on how I display my information. But, I do not really have a clear thesis to my essay and could go deeper than just saying what goes on during my writing process.